I accept the Perfect Poet nomination and nominate Nanno.
As I feel your breath
Seep into my skin,
I feel the depth of you
Settle into my bones
Where your thoughts end
And my thoughts begin
I do not know
For your soul and mine
Have clasped hands, melded
And beat from a solitary heart
I am grateful
I have not merely existed
With you, I have lived
This lovely award comes to me from the wise and fabulous brown paper bag girl.
I am supposed to tell you seven things about myself and tag fifteen bloggers. Sorry, I did not tag fifteen bloggers, but am offering a choice of which award you (anyone reading this) would like to have.
1. I am a licensed cosmetologist though I have not practiced the trade for many years.
2. I am a certified x-ray (dental) technician though I havn’t worked for a dentist for about twelve years.
3. I have very thin fingernails. If they actually ever get any length on them, they bend backwards. I’ve tried all sort of strengtheners to no avail. Dirt Man has really thick nails, and it ticks me off to no end!
4. My favorite Yankee candle scent is Citrus Sage.
5. I make fabulous spaghetti sauce, although it is never exactly the same because I NEVER measure anything.
6. I have hit a tennis ball with a racket, but I have never actually played a game of tennis.
7. I have a scar on my chest from a cigarette burn I received when I was probably about four years old. My father threw his cigarette out of the driver’s window and it flew back in the rear window. When it hit my chest, I pushed it against me because I was too young to understand the concept of letting it go to stop the pain. The car was moving so by the time they could remove my hands from my chest, the damage was done.
I was honored with this award from Slightly Ignorant. Geez, it’s a catchy name but I don’t like calling her that because she is brilliant. Both her fiction and poetry rock!
“Rules: Pass the award to seven bloggers who inspire you, make you laugh, make you think or a combination of all. Make sure you include a link to the person who gave you the award and that’s about it. Quite simple, fun and an easy way to brighten someone’s day.”
This comes from sweet Desiree.
I thank each of these three for these awards and bid them to take the other two. I award all three to Jingle for her continuing hard work that she puts into the rally each week. Anyone else reading this post, feel free to take one (your choise) of the three.






Your words are stunning in their beauty, Suzicate. You humble me.
By: Linda Medrano on July 1, 2010
at 9:01 pm
Congrats on all the lovely awards!
By: Heather on July 1, 2010
at 9:08 pm
wow,
suzi, how sweet of you, give me all three awards…
you truly my supportive and one of the most loyal poet …
unforgettable to me.
I thought I am going to give up the perfect poet award, not you, Raj, a poem a day, three poets expect me to take…
I will take it and post next time.
many thanks!
you are dear to be around.
By: Jingle on July 1, 2010
at 9:13 pm
Not only do I want to say CONGRATS on these super cool-looking awards, but your poem is just beautiful Suzie!
Loved the ending lines…
“I have not merely existed
With you, I have lived.”
That made my heart swell.
And I agree….Citus Sage is the BOMB! LOVE the aroma! I use to have one of the Citrus Sage air freshners in my car too!
X
By: Ron on July 1, 2010
at 9:14 pm
a few words, but you say so much and it is a poem in depth…
you are doing outstanding job!
loved the poem!
By: Jingle on July 1, 2010
at 9:14 pm
You are such a soulfull, creative and mindfull person. I love coming here:)
By: buttercup600 on July 1, 2010
at 9:16 pm
Love the poem and kudos for the awards. Can I get the recipe for the spaghetti sauce?
By: rudrip on July 1, 2010
at 9:18 pm
Very pretty awards! Congratulations.
I should check into citrus sage, sounds very nice.
Ouchee on the fingernails! Yikes.
By: Diane on July 1, 2010
at 10:02 pm
Congrats on all the awards and that poem is stunning. I’m with Ron In that I loved those last two lilne. Top notch as always.
By: pegbur7 on July 1, 2010
at 10:20 pm
Love the poem, and the awards are well-deserved. Your words are also thought-provoking, and always interesting. I would love to meet you in person!
By: Carol on July 1, 2010
at 10:47 pm
ouch! oh boy, every one has some scar from when they were young, I think. I have one on my back from when I walked into something, I don’t know what it is. It’s about 2 inches long. I think it give me character.
By: Jessica on July 1, 2010
at 11:19 pm
Beautiful poem — loved reading it aloud. Congratulations on all the awards.
Joanny
By: joan on July 1, 2010
at 11:54 pm
‘With you I have lived’
Beautiful posting of love.
Congrats on your awards, big props to Jingle!
By: Angelia Sims on July 1, 2010
at 11:56 pm
Wonderful poem.
(I won’t be participating in any award-giving activity for the moment, things are just too hectic with my overseas visitors and the last leg of the Soccer World Cup)
By: cindy on July 2, 2010
at 12:04 am
I like this part “For your soul and mine Have clasped hands”
When i saw the title, I was expecting a different take on “unity” but you took a different route which turned out to be the simplest and best route to have taken.
You are a writer…I’ve always known you for that.
Cheers!!!
By: Emmanuel Ibok on July 2, 2010
at 1:20 am
That is a truly beautiful and very touching poem.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
By: Ana Goncalves on July 2, 2010
at 3:59 am
Well done on receiving the awards, and I can resonate with you giving Jingle all these three in return because she does so much to help us all bloom into the world wide web through pure encouragement and in kindness. She is a star in disguise.
Hope you are well and having a nice day.
Enjoy the weekend!
By: Ana Goncalves on July 2, 2010
at 4:09 am
A poem I can relate to.. beautifully written
By: Spandhanaa on July 2, 2010
at 4:43 am
love the piece and u definitely deserve the award
By: unprecedentedintellectual on July 2, 2010
at 7:24 am
congratulations for all the awards.
the poem is so very beautiful.
By: Trisha on July 2, 2010
at 7:49 am
Love, love, love your poem!!
Have a wonderful weekned with your family.
Hugs,
Kelly
By: Kelly Berkey on July 2, 2010
at 8:40 am
SuziCate this is an absolutely stunning poem, simple and yet to very lovely. Congratulations on all the awards.
By: Aging Mommy on July 2, 2010
at 8:49 am
Oh sweetie, I am so sorry about the cigarette on your chest when you were 4, that must’ve been a trauma.
Okay, now I’m wanting spaghetti sauce. And to get my teeth X-Rayed. And to get a facial. And to NOT play tennis. (Never played a game either.)And to catch a whiff of Citrus Sage.
Actually, I get this inexpensive AHA peel stuff from Shimmer Cosmetics online — and it is FABULOUS. I also blonde my own roots and do my own pedicures. And trim my own hair!
Okay, way more info than you most likely bargained for in a comment.
xoxo
By: Jannie Funster on July 2, 2010
at 11:41 am
Jannie, you crack me up!
By: suzicate on July 2, 2010
at 12:01 pm
“For your soul and mine
Have clasped hands, melded
And beat from a solitary heart”
Beautifully stated.
Rhyme on!
Tim Keeton
(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales
By: Tim Keeton on July 2, 2010
at 3:27 pm
Lovely and romantic– as always, your use of language rocks!
http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
By: mairmusic on July 2, 2010
at 3:58 pm
Such a beautiful poem!
By: brownpaperbaggirl on July 2, 2010
at 4:10 pm
This is a beautiful poem of love. Lucky him, lucky you! Congratulations on all three well deserved awards. Heartspell
By: heartspell on July 2, 2010
at 5:04 pm
love the verse..that is the perfect description of what i have found…
By: brian on July 3, 2010
at 7:12 am
glad to know you are one of the lucky ones, too.
By: suzicate on July 3, 2010
at 9:59 am
My mistake, you nominated Noha…sorry.
letting you know I am getting your poem to my file so that it appears on Promising Poets Parking Lot…
I will post text only, and with your blog name, general blog link included.
Thank you for the contribution!
By: Jingle on July 3, 2010
at 10:16 am
Thank you.
By: suzicate on July 3, 2010
at 11:36 am
Aw, Suzi, thank you
! It means a lot to read that…
The poem you posted is beautiful.
By: slightlyignorant on July 3, 2010
at 3:41 pm
You are absolutely welcome!
By: suzicate on July 3, 2010
at 4:31 pm
Congratulations on your awards! Excellent poem. A healthy relationship should be exactly like that.
By: DiamondsAndDogs on July 3, 2010
at 4:17 pm
What a wonderful piece of poetry
Love poems are a dime a dozen usually, but every now and then one comes along that truly captures the essence of relationship. This poem, in my opinion, captures that essence very well. Well done, and Bravo!
Congrats on the awards!
Just Say’n
By: tracyhsays on July 3, 2010
at 6:30 pm
this poem represents what true love is. in my book, a relationship that feels any less than this… that’s not it. Kudos for such inspirational writing!
By: dragonfliesandgoosebumps on July 4, 2010
at 8:26 am
I love that poem!!
And that sucks about getting burned. I’ve been accidentally burned by a cigarette before, and it hurts!!
By: Jen @ Nathanrising on July 6, 2010
at 11:05 am
every single time I read this poem, it takes me completely. touches my soul. I hear my own heart’s voice in your words.
By: dragonfliesandgoosebumps on July 7, 2010
at 6:55 pm
unity of two souls! what could more beautiful than that? good poem of love!
By: doru on July 10, 2010
at 12:52 am
Wow… such a touching poem. I really liked:
“Where your thoughts end
And my thoughts begin”
Sometimes, when love is so deep, you resonate with someone so strongly that you seem to say the same things at the same time, do the same things, etc.
By: Gally Lines ~ LestISmiteThee.wordpress.com on August 4, 2010
at 7:59 pm