Posted by: suzicate | March 11, 2010

Wind Chimes Of My Heart

They ringed and dinged
When grabbed by the breeze
But oh how they clinged
To the limbs of the trees

As a young mother
the music soothed my soul
Their sunshine and laughter
Filled my aching heart’s hole

Barefoot children ran rampant
Under a hot summer sun
I tucked them into a heavenly slumber
When each day was done

They’d awake again to climb
The scales of my affection
The chimes would echo my heart
Upon a mirrored reflection

It was a dance of innocent love
A timeless melody of devotion
A gathering of crystal stars
Our lives were poetry in motion

Home base is anchored
Tubes randomly swing
And I am the force
From which their lives spring

I am learning to let go and flow
With the growing up of my chimes
As they continue to drift and shift
Through the changing of our times

This sweet chaotic concert of life
Has faded the softness of my lullabye
I must have music in my world
With none at all, I’d sooner die


Responses

  1. Never seen you write poetry before & hope I’ll see lots more. What a beautiful piece.

    • Thanks…it’s actually my first love! I posted one last week. And I put the poem I wrote about the meaning of my blog title on my About page – was originally posted with “Daddy was a Dowser”. I plan to post a poem every Thurs. for Jingle’s Thurday Poets’ Rally…check it out, on my blog roll…some great poets pass through there.

  2. good to see this

  3. Aw, Suzi, I love this!
    I love my windchimes and the metaphor is lovely!!

    • Thanks, Maureen. I know you write poetry. You should check out Jingle (on my blog roll) and consider participating in the Thursday Poets’ Rally. You don’t have to do it each week, but she does sponsor it weekly.

  4. Love it.

  5. “concert of life” that so deeply resonates! This is a lovely expression! Thank you.

  6. Excellent verse–I enjoyed your perspective. I am in one rather loud part of the concert with the little ones, but will soon miss all the excitment.

    • You certainly will miss those day…they pass all too soon!

  7. Great job Suzi. You dinged my chimes today. Love you!

    • Patt, Diane, and Peg, Thank you!

  8. I love this line:

    They’d awake again to climb
    The scales of my affection

    Beautiful. I feel a bit like that with my kitten. ;)

    • Awe…how sweet!

  9. Hi,

    there is No contest, we have 12 poets won week 8 perfect poet award, thus they have to accept the awards and nominate one poet…
    I notify them when they win…

    you have done good,
    I will link you in,
    sorry for the delay!

    Jingle

  10. there is No contest, we have 12 poets won week 8 perfect poet award, thus they have to accept the awards and nominate one poet…
    I notify them when they win…

    you have done good,
    I will link you in,
    sorry for the delay!

    Jingle
    Happy Thursday!
    Please visit some participants to get more feedback!

    • I am continuing to make the rounds…so many great poets!

  11. there is No contest, we have 12 poets won week 8 perfect poet award, thus they have to accept the awards and nominate one poet…
    I notify them when they win…

    you have done good,
    I will link you in,
    sorry for the delay!

    Jingle

    • No problem, thanks. Just wanted to make sure i was doing it correctly. I was worried I was going to have to go back and vote!

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  13. great job suzie..

    • Thanks, and yours too.

  14. This poem flows beautifully. Enjoyed it.
    You’ll find mine here.

    • Thank you so much. Going to check yours now.

  15. I love this. Great way to start my morning. Thanks for sharing.

    • You’re so sweet!

  16. “A gathering of crystal stars
    Our lives were poetry in motion”

    I loved that line. And what a beautiful metaphor for a mother and her children. Lord knows, both wind chimes and children are noisy!!

    ♥Spot

    • Aren’t they noisy…beautiful music, missed when it’s gone!

  17. Just beautiful! What a lovely piece! I’d love to see this published in maybe “Parenting” or some magazine. Think about submitting it. It really is so lovely!

    • My goodness you are sweet. I just love writing, don’t think too much about publishing anymore. Have published some poetry, but it has been YEARS.

  18. so nice to have poetry with my oatmeal

    • I’ll bet that was a surprise!

  19. Why do I have the sudden urge to hang windchimes on our deck? :)

    Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem, SuziCate.

    • Thanks. Wind chimes as almost as lovely as childhood.

  20. I needed this today SC. This is beautifully written. I agree, you should submit it.

    • Thanks…going to check to see if you do one this week.

  21. I like this, and its symbolism. Thanks for sharing!

  22. The chimes would echo my heart
    Upon a mirrored reflection
    ^^ I so loved the imagery here
    very well written…

    • Thank you so much, glad you like it.

  23. Okay, the very first stanza completely pulled me in, and the rest of it read like butter – - smooth! GO! WRITE! WIN!

    • Thank you my cheerleader! Have you posted today? I checked earlier, and I’m getting ready to check again.

      • I only posted a quote. I have been writing something else, but I may not post it. I can’t decide if I want to share it – - feels to personal, and not exactly the most upbeat piece of writing. One of those days. LoL

      • Doesn’t have to be upbeat, but only post if you feel it’s something you are comfortable sharing.

  24. A fun, though heartfelt read.

    Thanks!

    • Thank you, glad you liked it.

  25. Excellent! A wonderful flow of images and emotion :)

    • Thank you so much for coming back by and your kind words.

  26. That was fantastic! I love poetry like that..makes me smile

    • Always happy to make others smile.

  27. I just came by to thank you for the kind words on my poem, but I wish to compliment you on your piece as well.

    It conjures the most serene scene in my mind and takes me to a quaint summer cabin beside forest and lake. Even it wasn’t the image you had in your mind when you wrote it, I simply wanted to share the joy that poetry is meant to affect, that your poetry was able to affect in me.

    Thank you, and I’d love to read more of your work in the future. ♥

    • Thank you for stopping by and your wonderful words. I liked yours as well.

  28. A timeless melody of devotion.

    How true! Beautiful poem! You are so talented heart and soul. :-)

    • Angelia, you are just so sweet. Thanks for saying that.

  29. this is absolutely beautiful…makes me think of my childhood and my son.

    ~IS

    • Glad it resonated with you.

  30. Very nice,
    I read twice,
    I could hear
    those you hold dear.

    Good one, you should do more.
    D

    • Thanks…going to try to post one each Thursday.

  31. That was beautiful. I love it! Great job!! I totally agree with submitting it to parenting or some other magazine.

    • thanks. Awe, you’re such a sweetie!

  32. I’m so loving that you’re posting your amazing gift for poetry, SC!

    What a wonderful piece!

    This part especially touched me…

    “I am learning to let go and flow
    With the growing up of my chimes
    As they continue to drift and shift
    Through the changing of our times.”

    What beautiful words that reflect life!

    BRAVA!

    X

    • Thank you. Glad it touched you. Thanks for stopping by, Ron.

  33. Very Nice Suzi,

    You continue to impress me, Thank You

  34. My “chimes” are growing up and away too! I think my home will miss the beautiful music those chimes make when my youngest heads off to college in the fall!!! Loved your poem.

  35. This is a perfect poem to describe the epiphany I received today. Truly inspirational.

  36. Very well written Suzicate.. I loved it

    • Oh, thank you so much.

  37. I love poetry and THAT is beautiful!!
    -Jen


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