They ringed and dinged
When grabbed by the breeze
But oh how they clinged
To the limbs of the trees
As a young mother
the music soothed my soul
Their sunshine and laughter
Filled my aching heart’s hole
Barefoot children ran rampant
Under a hot summer sun
I tucked them into a heavenly slumber
When each day was done
They’d awake again to climb
The scales of my affection
The chimes would echo my heart
Upon a mirrored reflection
It was a dance of innocent love
A timeless melody of devotion
A gathering of crystal stars
Our lives were poetry in motion
Home base is anchored
Tubes randomly swing
And I am the force
From which their lives spring
I am learning to let go and flow
With the growing up of my chimes
As they continue to drift and shift
Through the changing of our times
This sweet chaotic concert of life
Has faded the softness of my lullabye
I must have music in my world
With none at all, I’d sooner die


Never seen you write poetry before & hope I’ll see lots more. What a beautiful piece.
By: Gropius on March 11, 2010
at 7:17 am
Thanks…it’s actually my first love! I posted one last week. And I put the poem I wrote about the meaning of my blog title on my About page – was originally posted with “Daddy was a Dowser”. I plan to post a poem every Thurs. for Jingle’s Thurday Poets’ Rally…check it out, on my blog roll…some great poets pass through there.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 8:11 am
good to see this
By: deanjbaker on March 11, 2010
at 8:17 am
Thank you.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 8:47 am
Aw, Suzi, I love this!
I love my windchimes and the metaphor is lovely!!
By: Maureen@IslandRoar on March 11, 2010
at 8:57 am
Thanks, Maureen. I know you write poetry. You should check out Jingle (on my blog roll) and consider participating in the Thursday Poets’ Rally. You don’t have to do it each week, but she does sponsor it weekly.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 9:01 am
Love it.
By: Patti on March 11, 2010
at 9:18 am
“concert of life” that so deeply resonates! This is a lovely expression! Thank you.
By: Diane on March 11, 2010
at 9:30 am
Excellent verse–I enjoyed your perspective. I am in one rather loud part of the concert with the little ones, but will soon miss all the excitment.
By: Slamdunk on March 11, 2010
at 9:52 am
You certainly will miss those day…they pass all too soon!
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:25 am
Great job Suzi. You dinged my chimes today. Love you!
By: pegbur7 on March 11, 2010
at 10:00 am
Patt, Diane, and Peg, Thank you!
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:25 am
I love this line:
They’d awake again to climb
The scales of my affection
Beautiful. I feel a bit like that with my kitten.
By: Rebecca @ Diary of a Virgin Novelist on March 11, 2010
at 10:04 am
Awe…how sweet!
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:24 am
Hi,
there is No contest, we have 12 poets won week 8 perfect poet award, thus they have to accept the awards and nominate one poet…
I notify them when they win…
you have done good,
I will link you in,
sorry for the delay!
Jingle
By: Ji on March 11, 2010
at 10:11 am
there is No contest, we have 12 poets won week 8 perfect poet award, thus they have to accept the awards and nominate one poet…
I notify them when they win…
you have done good,
I will link you in,
sorry for the delay!
Jingle
Happy Thursday!
Please visit some participants to get more feedback!
By: Jingle on March 11, 2010
at 10:12 am
I am continuing to make the rounds…so many great poets!
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:24 am
there is No contest, we have 12 poets won week 8 perfect poet award, thus they have to accept the awards and nominate one poet…
I notify them when they win…
you have done good,
I will link you in,
sorry for the delay!
Jingle
By: Jingle on March 11, 2010
at 10:13 am
No problem, thanks. Just wanted to make sure i was doing it correctly. I was worried I was going to have to go back and vote!
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:23 am
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By: Thursday Poets’ Rally Week 9 (March 11-17, 2010) « Jingle on March 11, 2010
at 10:16 am
great job suzie..
By: fiveloaf on March 11, 2010
at 10:27 am
Thanks, and yours too.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:22 am
This poem flows beautifully. Enjoyed it.
You’ll find mine here.
By: anthonynorth on March 11, 2010
at 11:07 am
Thank you so much. Going to check yours now.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:15 am
I love this. Great way to start my morning. Thanks for sharing.
By: TheLocalsLoveIt on March 11, 2010
at 11:07 am
You’re so sweet!
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:26 am
“A gathering of crystal stars
Our lives were poetry in motion”
I loved that line. And what a beautiful metaphor for a mother and her children. Lord knows, both wind chimes and children are noisy!!
♥Spot
By: Spot on March 11, 2010
at 11:17 am
Aren’t they noisy…beautiful music, missed when it’s gone!
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:27 am
Just beautiful! What a lovely piece! I’d love to see this published in maybe “Parenting” or some magazine. Think about submitting it. It really is so lovely!
By: Linda Medrano on March 11, 2010
at 11:22 am
My goodness you are sweet. I just love writing, don’t think too much about publishing anymore. Have published some poetry, but it has been YEARS.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:29 am
so nice to have poetry with my oatmeal
By: Allison on March 11, 2010
at 11:22 am
I’ll bet that was a surprise!
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:29 am
Why do I have the sudden urge to hang windchimes on our deck?
Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem, SuziCate.
By: Kristen @ Motherese on March 11, 2010
at 11:23 am
Thanks. Wind chimes as almost as lovely as childhood.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 11:30 am
I needed this today SC. This is beautifully written. I agree, you should submit it.
By: Hadassah on March 11, 2010
at 11:44 am
Thanks…going to check to see if you do one this week.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 12:10 pm
I like this, and its symbolism. Thanks for sharing!
By: zeldagirl on March 11, 2010
at 12:16 pm
The chimes would echo my heart
Upon a mirrored reflection
^^ I so loved the imagery here
very well written…
By: Rajlakshmi on March 11, 2010
at 12:37 pm
Thank you so much, glad you like it.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 12:49 pm
Okay, the very first stanza completely pulled me in, and the rest of it read like butter – - smooth! GO! WRITE! WIN!
By: unabridgedgirl on March 11, 2010
at 1:12 pm
Thank you my cheerleader! Have you posted today? I checked earlier, and I’m getting ready to check again.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 1:26 pm
I only posted a quote. I have been writing something else, but I may not post it. I can’t decide if I want to share it – - feels to personal, and not exactly the most upbeat piece of writing. One of those days. LoL
By: unabridgedgirl on March 11, 2010
at 2:35 pm
Doesn’t have to be upbeat, but only post if you feel it’s something you are comfortable sharing.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 2:47 pm
A fun, though heartfelt read.
Thanks!
By: BFG on March 11, 2010
at 1:12 pm
Thank you, glad you liked it.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 1:27 pm
Excellent! A wonderful flow of images and emotion
By: dustus on March 11, 2010
at 1:42 pm
Thank you so much for coming back by and your kind words.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 2:05 pm
That was fantastic! I love poetry like that..makes me smile
By: Lee the Hot flash queen on March 11, 2010
at 1:53 pm
Always happy to make others smile.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 2:05 pm
I just came by to thank you for the kind words on my poem, but I wish to compliment you on your piece as well.
It conjures the most serene scene in my mind and takes me to a quaint summer cabin beside forest and lake. Even it wasn’t the image you had in your mind when you wrote it, I simply wanted to share the joy that poetry is meant to affect, that your poetry was able to affect in me.
Thank you, and I’d love to read more of your work in the future. ♥
By: samanthayeh on March 11, 2010
at 2:32 pm
Thank you for stopping by and your wonderful words. I liked yours as well.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 2:46 pm
A timeless melody of devotion.
How true! Beautiful poem! You are so talented heart and soul.
By: Angelia Sims on March 11, 2010
at 2:43 pm
Angelia, you are just so sweet. Thanks for saying that.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 2:48 pm
this is absolutely beautiful…makes me think of my childhood and my son.
~IS
By: I.S. on March 11, 2010
at 3:17 pm
Glad it resonated with you.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 4:00 pm
Very nice,
I read twice,
I could hear
those you hold dear.
Good one, you should do more.
D
By: Dlloyd on March 11, 2010
at 3:24 pm
Thanks…going to try to post one each Thursday.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 3:58 pm
That was beautiful. I love it! Great job!! I totally agree with submitting it to parenting or some other magazine.
By: joz1234 on March 11, 2010
at 8:36 pm
thanks. Awe, you’re such a sweetie!
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 8:44 pm
I’m so loving that you’re posting your amazing gift for poetry, SC!
What a wonderful piece!
This part especially touched me…
“I am learning to let go and flow
With the growing up of my chimes
As they continue to drift and shift
Through the changing of our times.”
What beautiful words that reflect life!
BRAVA!
X
By: Ron on March 11, 2010
at 9:00 pm
Thank you. Glad it touched you. Thanks for stopping by, Ron.
By: suzicate on March 11, 2010
at 9:22 pm
Very Nice Suzi,
You continue to impress me, Thank You
By: Jimmy on March 11, 2010
at 11:47 pm
My “chimes” are growing up and away too! I think my home will miss the beautiful music those chimes make when my youngest heads off to college in the fall!!! Loved your poem.
By: Susie on March 11, 2010
at 11:53 pm
This is a perfect poem to describe the epiphany I received today. Truly inspirational.
By: Amber on March 12, 2010
at 1:23 am
Very well written Suzicate.. I loved it
By: nanno1982 on March 12, 2010
at 8:39 am
Oh, thank you so much.
By: suzicate on March 12, 2010
at 9:26 am
I love poetry and THAT is beautiful!!
-Jen
By: NathanRising on March 15, 2010
at 8:49 pm